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Taken over

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Broken, bleeding, screaming, crying on the floor.
Frighted as I am, I know for a fact you want more.
Limp on the ground, no strength to fight nor defend.
The wounds you create will take years to mend.

The slightest touch of your lips fills me with bliss,
But I know deep in my heart, kindness is amiss.
Pinned to the earth, but struggling to flee,
You claim to be weak, I strongly disagree.

Hard to breath, pain surging inside.
I longed for ecstasy, the request was denied.
With a lovely face, how can you be so mean?
What you're putting me through is a terrible scene.

Letting you take over, white flag waving high,
I tell the world as I know it good-bye.
You whisper in my ear, lay your head on my breast,
Telling me to behave, if I know what is best.
Quick poem I wrote while listening to loud music....i.e. Hollywood Undead. :headbang:
My friend *cough cough*Toki-Chan, offered the idea of dark topics, so I came up with this.
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thefireflii's avatar
EVERYONE SAYS THAT'S A GOOD BAND. :| I DON'T SEE IT. GIVE ME A SONG I MIGHT LIKE???

~Toki-chan :dygel:

P.S. To keep the natural beat of the rhythm flowing, instead of "mend" on the 4th line, it seems to me "amend" would sound flow more smoothly. As the same, instead of saying "horror" on the 12th line, maybe something like "terrible".

P.P.S. Anyway, I REALLY REALLY LOVE IT!! ^-^ Thanks so much for writing! :D Now you should write like... a love poem or something. ^-^ I love rhymes...